Thu 25 Aug 2005 @19:07
Colors bright and beautiful
Add interest to the day
So vivid and so brilliant
Life’s visions on display
Patterns in the warp and woof
Add texture to the nights
Sometimes what we feel the most
Is hidden from our sight
Stormclouds gather overhead
Blocking out the sun
So dreary and so dull
Colors fade and run
Snags and runs and tiny rips
The edges all are frayed
The fabric of my life unravels
And I am hanging by a thread
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Posted by tvansant
August 28th, 2005 at 19:03
Just wanted to say thanks for the writing comments. I’ve got a lot to think about as I’ve gotten lots of good advice. The only thing I’m certain of at this point is that I’m not going to stop writing anytime soon.
August 28th, 2005 at 22:20
Nice. I really liked this poem. Thanks