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  • RRR: Do You Haiku?

    Reduce, Reuse, Recycle.
    This is an update of a post from 25 April 2006

    I like shorter forms of poetry and I like that haiku traditionally has themes related to nature. A really good poem, in my opinion, distills a moment or an idea into a small crystal. It is clear and compact. At a glance you might exclaim, “Yes! Oh my god, that’s it exactly!” And then you spend an eternity examining the facets and the infinite truth reflected there.

    Poetry, and Asian poetry in particular, suffers in translation into another language. Still, there are gems to be found here. My favorite haiku in my recent reading is from Haiku: Seasons of Japanese Poetry edited by Johanna Brownell:

    These butterflies of ours –
    If they could speak, what pretty dreams
    We’d hear about the flowers.

    Call me a simpleton, but I get lost inside those words. How different would the world appear if we could see it through the eyes of a butterfly? This poem also reminds me of a well-known parable attributed to the Chinese philosopher Zhuangzi. The Complete Idiot’s Guide to to Taoism has this translation:

    Once Zhuangzi dreamt he was a butterfly, fluttering buoyantly; a butterfly fully content being himself. He knew of no Zhuangzi! Suddenly, he awakened. And plain-old Zhuangzi doesn’t know if he’s Zhuangzi who just dreamt a butterfly or the butterfly dreaming he was Zhuangzi.

    Taoist parables are full of paradoxes. How do we decide what is reality? And, for whatever reason, this reminds me of Edgar Allen Poe, the favorite of my maudlin teen years.

    A Dream Within A Dream

    Take this kiss upon the brow!
    And, in parting from you now,
    This much let me avow
    You are not wrong, who deem
    That my days have been a dream;
    Yet if hope has flown away
    In a night, or in a day,
    In a vision, or in none,
    Is it therefore the less gone?
    All that we see or seem
    Is but a dream within a dream.

    I stand amid the roar
    Of a surf-tormented shore,
    And I hold within my hand
    Grains of the golden sand
    How few! yet how they creep
    Through my fingers to the deep,
    While I weep – while I weep!
    O God! can I not grasp
    Them with a tighter clasp?
    O God! can I not save
    One from the pitiless wave?
    Is all that we see or seem
    But a dream within a dream?

    Is it important that he makes a statement at the end of the first section that is a question at the end of the second? [Bonus: What horror movie used those last two lines in the opening credits?] Hmmm, some days I think too much. And I seem to have wandered far from where I started. But that is the way with poetry and me — I wander.

    Once I had a lover who would put her head on my shoulder while I read poetry to her. [Actually, twice, but that sentence didn't sound quite right when I wrote it that way....] Poetry, I’ve heard it said, should be read out loud. And reading it out loud, but softly, to an ear that was right there, caressed by the words, was a lovely place to wander. And a heavenly place to be lost.

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    Posted on November 23rd, 2009 Tim 3 comments
     

    3 responses to “RRR: Do You Haiku?”

    1. This is one of the most romantic things you’ve ever posted.

      (The last paragraph, particularly.)

      Happy Thanksgiving!
      Hope your holiday was great;
      Turkey makes you tired.

      Did you have turkey in France? ~Tim

    2. Reply to comment:

      I did–twice! I had a gourmet turkey sandwich with brie and cucumber for lunch, and turkey medallions, escargot, and creme brulee for dinner.

      Awesomeness.

    3. how lovely the poems you’ve selected and even lovelier the image of lovers sharing it with her head on his shoulder.

      i’ve enjoyed poetry for a long time but only a couple weeks ago spent a long phone call reading it back and forth with a friend when i was sick in bed. it is a sweet memory.

      Ah, that is sweet. ~Tim