Fred Writes Erotica

13 Responses to “Fred Writes Erotica”

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   Anton Gully says:

   2009/12/10 at 23:33

   

   Funny!

   I like the Fred and Ginger concept. I hate coming up with names when I’m writing. I’m always expecting an angry email from someone demanding to know why I’m writing about THEM.

   Thanks! Now I hope I don’t get angry emails from the estates of Astaire and Rogers! ~Tim

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   Marisa Birns says:

   2009/12/10 at 23:36

   Ooh, Ginger stopped at the good part!

   Back to the writing board for her…

   We have to assume that what lead up to this point convinced Ginger that the “good part” wasn’t going to be that great. ~Tim

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   Jenn says:

   2009/12/11 at 02:20

   Erotica deserves complex syntax and complete, er, digital wandering.

   You can say that again! ~Tim

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   karen from mentor says:

   2009/12/11 at 06:44

   Good for Ginger. Strangers running roughshod over someone is never a good storyline….

   [I wrote an alternate story in my head though...hey....where's that music coming from?]

   I liked the [pardon my expression] wham bam thank you ma’am approach to your flash today.
   Karen :0)

   Thanks! I’d love to hear your version sometime. ~Tim

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   mazzz_in_Leeds says:

   2009/12/11 at 10:03

   Short and to the point!
   Made me chuckle.

   Thanks! I like any time I can bring a chuckle into someone else’s day. ~Tim

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   Laura Eno says:

   2009/12/11 at 10:39

   Short and, uh, erotic.

   Thanks! I hope I tickled your fancy a little. ~Tim

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   David says:

   2009/12/11 at 13:50

   and there was I scrolling down for the erotica and all I found was mazzz from leeds and Laura Eno!

   Poor Fred.

   Oh, sorry to disappoint. I bet if Mazzz and Laura wrote erotica it would be AWESOME! ~Tim

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   J. M. Strother says:

   2009/12/11 at 23:00

   Very funny.
   ~jon

   Thanks! ~Tim

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   John Wiswell says:

   2009/12/12 at 02:38

   Fantastic! Oh man. The only #firdayflash this week to make me laugh out loud. Thank you for it. Can’t say how many stories I’ve dropped after just that long, and I’m not even a slush reader. Love it!

   Thanks! That’s high praise! And thanks for the twitting. ~Tim

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    Oliva Tejeda says:

    2009/12/12 at 08:13

    Good for Ginger! If you’d gone on longer I would have dropped it, too. Seriously, though, in that one sentence, you can clearly feel the reader’s frustration. Well done. ~ Olivia

    Thanks! I lost count of how many revisions I tried to get that part just bad enough. ~Tim

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    Kim Batchelor says:

    2009/12/12 at 15:40

    Karen and Olivia stole my line! “Good for Ginger.” I guess that says just about all. I also laughed out loud. Short, sweet, to the point.

    Thanks! Glad I could make you laugh. ~Tim

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    Cecilia Dominic says:

    2009/12/14 at 16:20

    Loved the Sigh at the end of the first line. Great job with the superflash fiction!

    Cecilia

    Thanks! And if you thay it with a lithp…. [smirk] ~Tim

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    aymiee says:

    2009/12/15 at 08:16

    ahh..I’ve been so out of touch.. I needed that link to read up on Ginger and Fred! Have you considered a graphical interface to Fred or Ginger?

    I hadn’t thought graphic, but you gave me an idea for next week! ~Tim

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