Comments on: Fred Writes Erotica

By: aymiee

aymiee — Tue, 15 Dec 2009 13:16:31 +0000

ahh..I’ve been so out of touch.. I needed that link to read up on Ginger and Fred! Have you considered a graphical interface to Fred or Ginger?

I hadn’t thought graphic, but you gave me an idea for next week! ~Tim

By: Cecilia Dominic

Cecilia Dominic — Mon, 14 Dec 2009 21:20:17 +0000

Loved the Sigh at the end of the first line. Great job with the superflash fiction!

Cecilia

Thanks! And if you thay it with a lithp…. [smirk] ~Tim

By: Kim Batchelor

Kim Batchelor — Sat, 12 Dec 2009 20:40:34 +0000

Karen and Olivia stole my line! “Good for Ginger.” I guess that says just about all. I also laughed out loud. Short, sweet, to the point.

Thanks! Glad I could make you laugh. ~Tim

By: Oliva Tejeda

Oliva Tejeda — Sat, 12 Dec 2009 13:13:38 +0000

Good for Ginger! If you’d gone on longer I would have dropped it, too. Seriously, though, in that one sentence, you can clearly feel the reader’s frustration. Well done. ~ Olivia

Thanks! I lost count of how many revisions I tried to get that part just bad enough. ~Tim

By: John Wiswell

John Wiswell — Sat, 12 Dec 2009 07:38:25 +0000

Fantastic! Oh man. The only #firdayflash this week to make me laugh out loud. Thank you for it. Can’t say how many stories I’ve dropped after just that long, and I’m not even a slush reader. Love it!

Thanks! That’s high praise! And thanks for the twitting. ~Tim

By: J. M. Strother

J. M. Strother — Sat, 12 Dec 2009 04:00:03 +0000

Very funny.
~jon

Thanks! ~Tim

By: David

David — Fri, 11 Dec 2009 18:50:09 +0000

and there was I scrolling down for the erotica and all I found was mazzz from leeds and Laura Eno!

Poor Fred.

Oh, sorry to disappoint. I bet if Mazzz and Laura wrote erotica it would be AWESOME! ~Tim

By: Laura Eno

Laura Eno — Fri, 11 Dec 2009 15:39:10 +0000

Short and, uh, erotic.

Thanks! I hope I tickled your fancy a little. ~Tim

By: mazzz_in_Leeds

mazzz_in_Leeds — Fri, 11 Dec 2009 15:03:08 +0000

Short and to the point!
Made me chuckle.

Thanks! I like any time I can bring a chuckle into someone else’s day. ~Tim

By: karen from mentor

karen from mentor — Fri, 11 Dec 2009 11:44:56 +0000

Good for Ginger. Strangers running roughshod over someone is never a good storyline….

[I wrote an alternate story in my head though...hey....where's that music coming from?]

I liked the [pardon my expression] wham bam thank you ma’am approach to your flash today.
Karen :0)

Thanks! I’d love to hear your version sometime. ~Tim