Au and C, meet H₂O

5 Responses to “Au and C, meet H₂O”

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   Robert Collazo, Jr. says:

   2010/08/06 at 21:04

   I really like this, Tim. You had me from the opening verse, “the willow weeps but not for me…”. That’s a great line, and a great poem! Keep writing & I’ll keep coming back to check on you…Robert

   Thanks for stopping by and leaving such a wonderful comment, Robert. I hope you will keep coming back. ~Tim

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   mazzz in Leeds says:

   2010/08/07 at 05:30

   Oooh. This has set me up for the day – I feel a day of good cheer coming on. Thanks.

   Thanks, mazzz. I hope every day is a day of good cheer. ~Tim

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   Laura Eno says:

   2010/08/07 at 08:40

   That must have been one bad engagement! Awesome, Tim!

   Thanks, Laura. You know what they say, “The only good engagement is a –” Wait, that’s not right. I actually don’t know anything about engagements…. ~Tim

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   G.P. Ching says:

   2010/08/08 at 00:04

   Great rhythm to this one. I read it a few times. I think the use of chemical symbols was interesting. Nice work.

   Thanks, G.P. This one is really all about symbols. ~Tim

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   lime says:

   2010/08/08 at 17:48

   i have to echo the praise others have given about the opening line and the rhythm. and a full heart trumps a full hand any time.

   Thanks, Lime. Full hearts are the best. ~Tim

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