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Rock the Baby - Episode 8

Posted by Tim at 14:56 on 2010/08/24
Aug 242010

New episodes of Rock the Baby are posted each week. Read from the beginning here.

Lariat

Mr. Evans gave me a wink and a nod. I felt kind of bad that I wasn’t waiting around for the latest news, but this woman says she knows what caused all these problems. That’s gotta be worth something. Besides, she said she needs my help. What else could I do?

She was holding some kind of little steel case and I offered to carry it for her. She said no, let’s go. I told her my name is Ray as we walked to my parents’ house. Of course, that’s not really true. How do I explain to a woman named Gigi that I can’t pronounce the “jay” sound? What the hell do I call her? I got a little bit of a break on that. As she explained where she is from and where she wants to go she showed me her ID from some place called BokonoCorp. She has a PhD. She may not like me calling her “Doc,” but at least I can pronounce it.

We didn’t talk much more on the way home. She wouldn’t give me any details until after we were safely inside the house. Basically, she wants to go to BokonoCorp headquarters which, it turns out, is a few miles on the other side of my apartment. I’m not thrilled at the idea of walking back there, but I do know the way.

When we got to the house she asked if I had water. I told her about the water in the bathtub and that there were bottles of water to drink that weren’t cold of course. She asked me for a big mixing bowl. I pulled the biggest one I could find out of the kitchen cabinets. She explained she was going to dip a bowlful of water from the tub, use that to freshen up a bit, and then pour it down the toilet to flush it. I didn’t ask where she got her urban survival training.

While she went to clean up I pulled out the gas grill and checked the propane tank. Full. Good old dad even had another full tank on the shelf. Who does that? Anyway, it reminded me that I still don’t know where my parents are. I wonder if those people running around getting the news can pass the word around that I’m looking for them?

The freezer yielded some steaks and onion rings that were starting to thaw. I set them on the kitchen counter and pulled out my yo-yo while I waited for my guest. When she walked in the room looking even more beautiful [if that's possible] I asked her to tell me what caused all the electronics to stop working.

“I did,” she told me. She put that little steel case on the table. “With this.”

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3 Responses to “Rock the Baby – Episode 8”

  1. [...] Rock the Baby – Episode 8 – Lariat by Tim VanSant [...]

  2. Tim – I’m finally stopping by to catch up with your story – this is terrific – i like the little (or big) cliffhanger in each episode, although i read them straight through to this episode. I’m very much looking forward to finding out who this chick is and why she singled out our hero. Keep up the good work! We are very happy to have you participating in #TuesdaySerial!

    Thanks, PJ. This is a fun little project to work on. I’m glad the little [and big] cliffhangers are working and that you’re enjoying the story. Keeping each episode short while still having something [that I hope is] interesting is one of the biggest challenges. ~Tim

  3. This is such a cool collection! All very quick little vignettes. Nice work Tim. :)

    Thanks, Carrie. Quick little vignettes is what I was going for. Cool is a bonus! ~Tim

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